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A new and refreshing trouble

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Trying a new style for the drawings aka this is the easy way for the story time. ;D

So, yes, SHORT STORY TIME!

Savannah was very excited. That day they were going to see one of the horses accepted by the standards placed by her sister, finally. It was a hard job to find one in her level. Not so advanced and not too green. And not too expensive. He was on a club a little faraway from theirs, anyways that wasn't a problem. At 2 pm Savannah picked up her sister and they went to the club.
-Ok, so, if you like this horse we can call the vet and ask for a general check- The blondie smiled to Dany and then she answered -I have the feeling that this horse is the one that i was looking forrrrrr- Well, she was a lot more excited than Sav, still not understanding the fact that she was going to get her first horse. 
-But let me ride him first, i'm more experienced than you and it will be safer.- She nodded and started to relax herself.
2 hours and 10 songs after, they finally arrived to the stables. There was a really big old man waiting for them in the gate.
-Well hello ma'ams! You both are the girls who are lookin' for... Mhmmm lemme see- He started to search some papers -Yes. Hugo is his name, right?- The girls nodded at the same time. The man smiled and then he started to walk -C'mon girls, i dun' have all the day!- Then the sisters started to walk behind him. -He has been checked by a vet already, if you two want you can look the exams while i saddle him up.- He gave to the girls some papers and they started to read it. Then, the guy stopped in front of a box. -By the way, here's Hugo- Dany looked up and her eyes started to shine.
-Oh my god, he's so beautiful!- She came closer and started to pet him. -He's a 7 years old gelding, well trained, but if you ask me, i think he is afraid even of himself.- Savannah started to get a little worried, but Daniela didn't even pay attention to that. Everything was ok according to the vet, and seemed legit. Maybe she didn't has to call her own vet. 5 minutes after, they were walking to the arena. Yes, the horse was a little nervous, but he was ok. The guy with no name helped Sav to get on him. 
They started to walk while Dany and the man were watching them. She smiled, and started to get more information from him, unnecesary things for a girl who alrealdy fell in love with a horse. Then trot, and everything was perfect. He was listening to her sister and she was convinced that she was going to buy him. 
He spooked with something, maybe his shadow or these ghosts -Woah guy, it's okay.- She stroked his neck and they started to trot again. -How much does he jump?- 
-I think something like 1 m, but for his height it's still small- She nodded, that was ok for her. They cantered a little and then started to jump. And everything was perfect. Except the moment when he started to refuse at them, he was bothered, angry, not willing to cooperate. He was a totally new horse. -Does he do this thing everyday?- At that point, Dany was sure that she was going to buy him, even if she needed to fix that problem. She wanted him. -Well...Yes.- He scratched his head. Hugo was rearing up, and kicking the air. After 10 minutes Sav managed to calm him down. Now she was angry too, and forced him to do more jumps. -So?- Dany asked at the same time that Savannah dismounted the horse. -I don't know sistah, you can try him if you want, because if this were my decision, i would say no. And you know it, but maybe...- Nop. Dany didn't care. She mounted Hugo and 40 minutes after she dismounted with a smile. Yes, the horsie was still bothered and at some points he didn't even want to walk, but he was perfect to her.
-May we have a time to talk, Sir?- Savannah asked with a smile, and he said "yes" with the head, giving to the girls some space. 
-Well, Dany, i don't know. I mean, he's a good horse, and i know you can carry him but i don't want you to buy him and in a month see how you give this horse to a new owner. So, if you really want to buy him and you'll have patience with his problems, we're going to come here one or two more times and we'll buy him.- Dany smiled and hugged her. -Oki'doki Sir!-.
So, they visited the horse a few more times and everything was the same, so Dany ended up buying him. Yes, she cried and screamed and a lot of more things because of happiness. Because who wouldn't?

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YESSSSS. My first "long" story. Sorry for all the crappy grammar and everything-errors. I'm still learning english ;D
References n' stuff are things that i'll post later. :)
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This really looks amazing :o! I love it :3